You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Krishnapriya. I have been living in 12(B)
apartment
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in Green city villa
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5 years. I hereby writing
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letter to know more about the upcoming skyscrapers project near
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our villa. The advent of
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brand new shopping centre called Skyline has been
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in our locality.
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I read
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related to
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local
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. Indeed the centre is advantageous to some extent but it would
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detrimental
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impact on our area. Especially the construction may cause serious environmental contamination.
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scarcity of water in our area. These are some of my
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regarding the company. I would like to know more about the entrepreneurs and the exact location and side
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Krishnapriya
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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