In spite of the advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

There is a widespread phenomenon that after all the improvements made in agriculture,

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number of individuals globally are without food.

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of all outline the key factors as to why people are still hungry and

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bring to bare solutions to

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problem after which a logical conclusion shall be made.

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of all,

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of

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to

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in the sector is one of the enormous

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contributing to famine globally. A lot of youths after graduation want to sit in the offices and

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rather than

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be on the farms.

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there is nobody to operate the sophisticated machines and so the few farmers do it to feed their families and not on

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basis.

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for

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. Most of these

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are manufactured in

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foreign countries and when imported, some do not come with

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manuals or those that have it too can not be read and understood because it is written in a different language and so these machines are left unused and people go back to

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with their hands.

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, it was reported that quite a lot of

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brought in from China to help

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the rice plantation farm in

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has been abandoned for the past two years due to the

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of personnel to manage it. In terms of solution, the government should make the agriculture department attractive for the youngsters so that majority will be willing to

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there after school to handle the new

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brought in with their knowledge and skills. Again, transporters of farming items should ensure that how to use the things are attached to it and is

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written in different languages so that

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can be used without them.

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, since it was announced at the national food day celebration that

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entering the agriculture sector would be given a car and accommodation, the workforce has increased as well as local rice production from 5% to 20%. In conclusion, considering the core reasons and associated solutions, it would

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be necessary to motivate the educated young ones to take up farming.