Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that

teenagers

should spend their time doing unpaid

work

to help the

community

.

Such

people believe that it can benefit both the individual and the

society

. I disagree with the latter.

Teenagers

already have a lot of

work

taking up their time like homework, class assignments, exam revision, etc.

For example

, many schools usually want their students to improve their grades, and they believe that

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giving them more assignments would help. In my opinion, I feel that

teenagers

should spend their leisure doing something that they love or want to do. Some like to volunteer in

community

services, and others like to play games,

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part in sports or other activities. Adding on, I do not think

teenagers

doing unpaid

work

would benefit

society

in any way. To support my opinion, I would like to state that

society

already has many people volunteering to help the

community

. I do not think that

teenagers

would be suitable for these kinds of things.

For example

, in Vietnam, there are many organisations that do not allow adolescents as they find them hard to deal with. In my opinion, teens would normally like activities that are more exciting and action-packed. To summarize, I disagree with the statement of having

teenagers

do unpaid voluntary

work

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an essential part of their school life.

Teenagers

should spend their time and live their life having fun because they still have a long life ahead of them and even if they want to volunteer in non-profit

community

services,

society

would not benefit from them.