With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The

health

Use synonyms

sector has undergone significant changes in the

last

Linking Words

couple of decades. These improvements have been necessary to cater for the growing number of

patients

Use synonyms

in today's society, the majority of these being the elderly.

However

Linking Words

, there is ongoing speculation

into

Change preposition

about

show examples

the capabilities of the current

health

Use synonyms

services

Use synonyms

in managing the increasing number of elderly people.

Personally

Add a comma

,Personally

show examples

I

diasagree

Correct your spelling

disagree

that

this

Linking Words

is a cause for concern as the majority of

patients

Use synonyms

have always been the elderly and facilities present have always benefited them.

Additionally

Linking Words

society has enough resources to manage geriatric

patients

Use synonyms

.

This

Linking Words

essay will

further

Linking Words

elaborate on these ideas.

First

Linking Words

of all, the increasing number of elderly

patients

Use synonyms

isn't a new observation and is an issue that has always been present. The majority of

patients

Use synonyms

that require the most

assiatance

Correct your spelling

assistance

have always been the elderly.

This

Linking Words

stems from

natural

Correct article usage

the natural

show examples

wear and tear of the human body as one

ages

Change to a singular noun

age

show examples

.

Thus

Linking Words

Use synonyms

Health-

Correct your spelling

Healthcare

show examples

care

Use synonyms

has long been adapting to

care

Use synonyms

for

this

Linking Words

older generation and prioritises them compared to the rest of the population.

iIn

Correct your spelling

in

I

is

addittion

Correct your spelling

addition

to primary

care

Use synonyms

services

Use synonyms

, most elderly

patients

Use synonyms

also

Linking Words

avail of

care

Use synonyms

homes to

further

Linking Words

aid their

health

Use synonyms

concerns. Take Ireland as an example, there are nursing homes available within every major city which

benefits

Correct subject-verb agreement

benefit

show examples

the elderly, in terms of

health

Use synonyms

care

Use synonyms

older

patients

Use synonyms

are prioritized and avail of the optimum service to manage the chronic illnesses that plague them. In short, the growing numbers isn't

Correct article usage

a

show examples

case

Correct your spelling

cause

show examples

for concern as the

health

Use synonyms

system has always held elderly

patients

Use synonyms

ina high regard

Additionally

Linking Words

, the

health

Use synonyms

sector is constantly taking on new projects to provide better service. Like many other sectors,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

health

Use synonyms

services

Use synonyms

are always aiming to better perform their duties. Yearly, they take inventory , which is clearly seen by the group meetings held in private practices and university hospitals alike. In these meetings, they look at their performance ,allocation of facilities and how they can provide quality

care

Use synonyms

Correct your spelling

to patients

patients

topatients

Correct your spelling

to patients

of different ages. These

meeting

Fix the agreement mistake

meetings

show examples

usually result in better management of

patients

Use synonyms

which has a direct impact on the elderly population. in conclusion, The

aging

Change the spelling

ageing

show examples

population has always been well cared for within the

heath

Correct your spelling

health

show examples

services

Use synonyms

. As well as

this

Linking Words

, hospitals are always adapting to meet the needs of these

patients

Use synonyms