Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of society holds a belief that Physical training classes play a huge role in the curriculum, chiefly for the

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, children should spend more time on academic

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need to balance every single

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time according to the priority. On the one hand, it is undeniable that

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is not vital as compared to other classes,

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has its own merits than others.

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, folks need to change their low-

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minds, thinking that

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type of

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is not significant at all.

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,

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can widen their horizons and broaden their perspectives about

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activities

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activities

as they can implement all those knowledge outside the

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, the community argues that the

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needs to prioritise the core

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rather than unnecessary

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. Looking at the negative sides,

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will not feel the exhilaration when attending

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, they cannot focus in the

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as sometimes those non-crucial

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can be a stress-free coping mechanism for them.

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the theories or the concepts of certain academic

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, they need a light subject so they can rest their concentrated minds. In conclusion,

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the academic subject should be the top priority in

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, Physical learning

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cannot be ignored. I think it is better for the

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to restain the Physical schooling

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for the

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rather than demolish it.