Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of society holds a belief that Physical training classes play a huge role in the curriculum, chiefly for the

school

students

.

On the contrary

, children should spend more time on academic

subjects

. In my perspective,

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school

need to balance every single

class

time according to the priority. On the one hand, it is undeniable that

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Physical

schooling

class

is not vital as compared to other classes,

however

,

this

kind of

class

has its own merits than others.

Therefore

, folks need to change their low-

class

minds, thinking that

this

type of

class

is not significant at all.

In other words

,

students

can widen their horizons and broaden their perspectives about

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activities

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activities

as they can implement all those knowledge outside the

class

.

For instance

, checking the pulses via the

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heartbeats.

On the other hand

, the community argues that the

school

needs to prioritise the core

subjects

rather than unnecessary

subjects

. Looking at the negative sides,

students

will not feel the exhilaration when attending

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school

.

As a result

, they cannot focus in the

class

as sometimes those non-crucial

subjects

can be a stress-free coping mechanism for them.

For instance

, after hours

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the theories or the concepts of certain academic

subjects

, they need a light subject so they can rest their concentrated minds. In conclusion,

although

the academic subject should be the top priority in

school

, Physical learning

class

cannot be ignored. I think it is better for the

school

to restain the Physical schooling

class

for the

students

rather than demolish it.