Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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on their hobbies.

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is due to more

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allocated to working and minimal

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spent on enjoyment .

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matter

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has negative implications both on a personal and a social level.

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issue and its effects.

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of all, the main reason why fewer

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partake in their hobbies is due to overworking. As a society, there has been a shift in priorities, with the majority of

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now career-driven and

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to be at the top of their chosen fields. In the pursuit of attaining

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goal, many seldom sleep and

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long hours to reach

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is clearly evident in the increasing number of working hours in countries

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as China with many having a

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week, an enormous undertaking for the average person. With all

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allocated to working,

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no longer have the

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for leisure as

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is now allocated to rest

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before the vicious cycle starts again in the following week.

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is one of the major reasons why

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have less

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available to spend on their past-times

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phenomenon has taken a toll on many of these employees mentally. Many

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individuals

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individuals

feel trapped in

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cycle of overworking and are unable to free themselves of

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issue.

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, a growing body of research has stated that psychiatric hospitals are now admitting more

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patients than ever before. These individuals are often severely depressed and feel empty despite trying to

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every working hour with

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instance, their jobs have led them to mental instability and an antidote is often getting a past-

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among other forms of therapy.

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employment is a means to a stable income, it robs some workers of their livelihood and a balance should be maintained between

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and hobbies. In conclusion, past-times are seldomly done now, because of the demands of

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.

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has led to increased incidences of depression as they

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trapped within their occupations. A balance

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between

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and past-times could be beneficial in

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alleviating

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matter.