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It is believed that schools should focus more on practical skills than theory. How far do you agree? Why?

#schools #focus #skills #theory
It is believed that schools should focus more on practical
skills
 than theory. I believe practical
skills
 are much more crucial for schools.
such
 as life-saving
skills
 and trying to learn.
Firstly
, I agree that practical
skills
 are vital for our
lives
.Practical
skills
 are more useful and exciting for the
school
 curriculum.
However
,
theories
 are dull. It doesn'
t
 just teach you to memorise  some type of formula. It would disincline
students
 from attending
school
.
such
 as memorising long physics or mathematics
theories
.  
Secondly
,
theories
 aren'
t
 useful. We can'
t
 use them in our daily
lives
 or at
school
. applicable things in
school
.
Instead
 of teaching physics formulas, we can show
physiqs
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physics
physiques
 with experiments. It would be much more understandable for
students
.I believe every
school
 will include practical
skills
 in their curriculum in the future.
However
, they increase the self-reliance of
students
.
such
 as public speaking and communication
skills
.
Thirdly
, the
theories
 are very outdated. We shouldn'
t
 use them in the 21st century.
Instead
 of it, we can teach practical
skills
. It would maximize
school
 quality and  student
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happiness
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theories
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stories
 are very unnecessary. They are very complicated.
Formuls
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Formulas
Formula
 are just confusing to
students
' brains. We must focus on practical
skills
. Practical
skills
 would manage our
lives
.
such
 as leadership, fast reading, and public speaking.  
consequantly
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consequently
  practical
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 of profit  for  schooll.İ
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skills
.İ believe  practicals
skills
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.
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 as 
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