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the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables illustrate the distribution of
world
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population
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 between 1950 and 2000
as well as
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 the 2050 figures.
Overall
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, in 1950, the
world
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population
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 was 2,5 billion people.
This
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 rose to 6,0 billion in 2000 and is estimated to have reached 9 billion in 2050. Regionally, Oceania has the least
population
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 of less than 1% to 1% in 1950 and 2000.
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 percentage is expected to remain the same by 2050. North and Latin America and Africa each had less than 10% of the
world
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population
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 in 1950. In 2000, North America’s
population
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 dropped by 2%
while
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 and African populations increased by 3 and 4% respectively. North American
population
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 in 2050 will have dropped to 4%
whereas
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 Africa’s will have risen to 20%. In 1950, 56% of the
world
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’s
population
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 was in Asia with 22% residing in Europe. In 2000, Asia’s
population
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 increased by 4% as compared to Europe’s 10% decline. In 2050, Europe’s
population
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 would have dropped to 7% and most
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population
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 will be in Asia.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population with synonyms.
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