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Nowadays a growing number of boys and girls within normal weight ranges have an intense fear of gaining weight and therefore get anorexia. Why do you think a lot of teenagers have a strong desire to be skinny? What can be done to prevent this eating disorder?

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In today's world teenagers of normal weight have fear of increasing weight and possible changes accrued in their
body
 due to overweight and
therefore
 they get anorexia. Anorexia is a disorder in which
people
 start eating less food and it will impact the overall development of the
body
 ,personally, I think youth have a desire to be skinny because they think it is a new
trend
 or they have to go with the
trend
. I think the main reason to be skinny is, that young age boys and girls are found them more attractive paper-like
body
 shapes and some
people
 endorse them on social media platforms for
this
. They think that they get more appreciation and attention on the various social media sites, so teenagers start comparing with each other and begin the process of having less food and following strict diet plans to attain a thin frame,
however
, it is actually not good for them physically as well as mentally. So being skinny become a
trend
 in the minor age generation.
People
 will have to think about the prevention of anorexia because it became a very common problem among minor age girls and boys.
Firstly
, parents should discuss with them about
this
 and explain to them the benefits of becoming healthy
for instance
, with good fitness they can concentrate on their education and career. In ,addition
people
 have to start judging each other on the basis of their talent
instead
 of their
body
 shape. Subject related to the importance of physical and mental well-being is
also
 added to the education system. In conclusion, it is generally said that health is wealth, so everyone has to give more value to their fitness
instead
 of following the
trend
 of social networking sites, especially youth because they are more volatile to these trends.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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