Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about whether the hard-working and perseverance or wealth and good looking are the most important parts of achievement. I personally believe that these factors are equally important.

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with, there is no doubt that working hard is a positive attitude towards success. Those who spend more time on their work and studies are likely to gain a better

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since they focus on what they are operating

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Moreover

, once set up a goal, doing repetitive

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is a vital element.

For example

, it is observed that famous talented scientists have a similar quality which is perseverance since the process of exploring the unknown world could experience uncountable failures and consistent trying. Without a significant number of trials, it would be impossible to achieve the goal.

On the other hand

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however

, opponents argue that wealth and appearance could be the initial factors.

Firstly

, with the trend of materialism and consumerism, the way we live has changed dramatically. Having good fortune means being able to purchase big houses and obtain a better education, as well as living a high-quality life, which is the definition of “success” for some individuals.

In addition

, accomplishments could be achieved by good looking. There is a considerable number of celebrities

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as actresses and pop stars under the spotlight due to the fact that they have appealing appearances, giving them opportunities to gain funding from companies and build a reputation. In conclusion, there is no standard to define what can be called accomplishment. For most ordinary people, appearance is not easy to improve, which is not the normal way leading to success, but the more you work hard, the more chances of achievement you could gain.