Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People have different views about whether scientific studies should be conducted by the

government

or individual corporations. While someone may disagree, I believe that

government

should be responsible for scientific study. Several reasons are put in place why the

government

should take charge of the

research

First

of all, it can be safe when a dangerous technology is developed by the

government

For example

, if private corporations can take part in the development of nuclear weapons, it is extremely dangerous and they may be sold weapons to others in terms of benefits while

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the outcome it may bring to society.

Secondly

, the money spent by the

government

mainly comes from taxes.

Therefore

, it is possible for every citizen to enjoy the advantages of a novel scientific finding. If it is carried out by

companies

, only the rich can have the chance to benefit from it.

Nevertheless

, I would have to agree that there are

also

some benefits when scientific studies are carried out by personal

companies

. The main advantage may be that a useful scientific result can make direct profits so that more job opportunities

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given to not only scientists but

also

ordinary people. Since a company

also

need people who take charge of sale or other support. What is more, it is more efficient to conduct a

research

program

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companies

. Less money can be wasted and more findings may be obtained through a large investment. In conclusion,

although

there are some benefits to carrying out

research

programs by

companies

, I believe it is better for

government

to take

the

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responsibility

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scientific

research

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

scientific research
socially responsible outcomes
corporate profit
profit motives
fundamental areas
long-term societal development
innovative research outcomes
mixed approach
stifle innovation
bureaucratic processes
breakthrough projects
commercial gain
scientific progress
public access
government funding
private sector
public benefit

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Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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