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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement?

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It is believed that later, no
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 will think about purchasing published newspapers or
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 as they are easily available to go through online unpaid.
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, people who are not comfortable reading on electronic devices due to the strain on their
eyes
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 will prefer printed news and
books
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. I agree with the fact that many would eventually go for free online for reading. To start with, the public will surely choose to read news and
books
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 on the internet. The reason is that it is convenient to find and download and another reason is that it is available cost-free.
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, these days, everyone has an internet connection on their handy mobile or laptop.
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,
books
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 have become too expensive to buy. I would like to share
one
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 of my experiences, I wanted to buy a book titled 'Dan Brown'. I thought about purchasing it from the nearby bookshop, but
one
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 of my friends suggested I should try reading it online which absolutely costs no money and is downloaded within seconds.
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, we know that paper manufacturing requires cutting down trees, which is harmful to the environment.
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 papers are readily available in the market, it costs the cutting down of forests.
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, opting for online reading is not only convenient but
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 environment-friendly.
On the other hand
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, readers face screen effects on their
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 like itching, reddening, burning and drying
eyes
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 while reading on electronic devices like mobile phones, laptops, tablets, etc. Prolonged use of
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 devices for reading might cause
one
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 to have a minus number on their eye lenses.
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, most patients at eye hospitals have been reported due to overexposure to
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 on electronic gadgets.
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,
one
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 should not opt for an online reading despite having pain in their
eyes
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 as well as a headache. To sum up, according to me, the number of folks preferring to read on the screen would definitely rise over the period of years as it is priceless and convenient rather than searching for a printed format which would eventually harm nature.
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, there are health issues caused by the continuous use of electronic gadgets which can be outweighed by proper care for the
eyes
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital platforms
  • Global audience
  • Cost benefits
  • Environmental benefits
  • Carbon footprint
  • Tactile experience
  • Screen-free reading
  • Credibility
  • Misinformation
  • Digital divide
  • Access to digital resources
  • Lack of reliable internet
  • Enduring appeal
  • Collectability
  • Physical copies
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