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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, private colleges and
universities
 along with schools have high
tuition
fees
. It is true that some individuals
work
 while studying,
as a result
, they have no sufficient time for education and are constantly feeling under pressure. In
this
 essay, I will explain why the case is so and give some possible solutions to eliminate
this
 problem. The are many reasons why some
students
work
 along with their studies.
First
 and foremost, due to expensive
tuition
fees
 in colleges and schools for that reason, some individuals
work
 in small companies and factories to clear their
fees
,
as a result
, they get less time for education and feel under pressure.
For example
, in
Canada
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 more than 50% of overseas
students
work
 part-time jobs in malls and grocery stores to manage their college
fees
.
Secondly
, some
students
 belong to low caste families so they earn money by working in companies and small shops to support their families .
Also
, some
students
 gain experience in their
work
 field while studying at
universities
.
On the other hand
, there are some possible solutions to eliminate
this
 problem.
Firstly
, the government should provide scholarships for individuals to support their
tuition
fees
 while studying in
universities
 and colleges.
For example
, the Canadian government provide higher grants of approximately 50000 dollars during their study in
universities
.
Furthermore
, the educational department should give external working hours for
students
 to support their
tuition
fees
 while studying in their courses. In conclusion, due to expensive
tuition
fees
 and belonging to low caste families,
students
work
 while studying.
However
,
i
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I
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 think that giving scholarships and external working hours help
students
 to cope with
this
 problem.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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