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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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 or travel in another country, whereas some others mention that these are not the only factors regarding why people should master a foreign accent. I believe that speaking a new dialect is bound to neither profession nor excursion and it can be learned for a variety of reasons. The only purpose of learning a foreign vocabulary is due to occupation and trips to foreign countries. As languages are a means of communication, we can't expect to socialize with locals in our mother dialect. When our destination is a small country, not knowing their mother dialect can be frustrating because
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 we'll have to use various translating apps or hire a tour guide to effectively socialize with locals. another salient point to bear in mind is that since we can't attend any meetings or events with acceptable efficiency, companies nowadays have set accent proficiency as a requirement for job positions. For these reasons, speaking a foreign expression is a vitality if one has to
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 or go on a trip there. Having said that, I don't see eye to eye with the group of people that bind the necessity of mastering a new tongue to
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 and travel.primarily, it is a great method for memory training and as a ,result the chances of diagnosis with a disease
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 as Alzheimer's will drastically decrease. Neurologists suggest that training our brain with methods
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 as practising another language, reading words backwards etc can keep memory loss at bay. In conclusion, while mastering a foreign language because we have to
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 or travel there is a reason why folks learn it, it is not the only factor and other reasons
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 as brain training and making online friends from different countries can be a motivation as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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