Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While it is believed by some individuals that popular personalities can attract public attention to critical issues, others opine that
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problems will not be taken seriously.
Celebrities
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with a huge number of followers can create awareness about important issues by posting them on their social
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accounts. Famous people enjoy huge fan following and in
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age of social
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they are constantly connected to their followers.
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,
celebrities
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can voice their concerns on social
media
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and reach millions of followers instantly.
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reach and influence enable them to create awareness about various social and political
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. Needless to say, many major international organizations often seek the
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of
celebrities
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to promote their
causes
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.
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rights group PETA often uses Hollywood
celebrities
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in their
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campaigns
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have been hugely successful and have played a massive role in making people aware of animal rights.
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of
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does not always help social or humanitarian
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.
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are often seen as opportunists and
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when they voice their
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for a cause, people are more inclined to believe that they are doing
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for some free publicity. In some cases,
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is true too. Many
celebrities
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have a desperate need to stay in the limelight so when an
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arises, they are often the
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ones to voice their opinion. While
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certainly helps them to get some
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coverage, in
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process they are
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taking attention away from the cause. Sometimes it is common for two or more
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to be on opposite sides of an
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and engage in silly fights on social
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. In
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cases, obviously, the
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will be forgotten as the
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is only interested in covering the celebrity fight. There are
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some
celebrities
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who act in ways that violate their proposed stand on a particular
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.
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, some
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who have participated in
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against fur are often seen wearing fur themselves.
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ridiculous acts do not serve the interests of any
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. In conclusion, when respected
celebrities
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lend their sincere
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to
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they believe in, they certainly help to make a difference.
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, organizations should avoid roping in
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who only have
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agendas as they will do more harm than good.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international aid organizations
  • draw attention to
  • important problems
  • celebrities
  • make the problems seem less important
  • influence
  • raise funds
  • public awareness
  • engagement
  • inspire
  • helping those in need
  • distract from
  • real issues
  • deep understanding
  • advocate for
  • overshadow
  • work of aid organizations
  • shallow
  • superficial understanding
  • sensationalize
  • own gain
  • genuinely beneficial
  • caution must be exercised
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