There are more families having only one child in the modern days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, most
couples
prefer to have small families. Simply because they feel having a single Use synonyms
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is beneficial for their own freedom as well as for the environment. In Use synonyms
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essay, I am going to discuss the importance of controlling the birth rate and why I agree with the above statement.
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so they could have their own freedom. Unlike a couple of decades ago, Use synonyms
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do not want to spend their entire life dedicated to their children. If they force to do so, they will put unnecessary pressure on themselves and more importantly, If they don't give the love and the care children need, their future could be in danger as well. Use synonyms
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could feel the loneliness of not having a sibling, If the parents won`t get the space they need, it could have a more devastating impact on everyone in the family. Use synonyms
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, having a lot of kids could lead to many financial issues. Linking Words
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, a recent survey done at Melbourne university shows that 60% of families with two children or more have a lot of financial issues and they always request financial support from the government.
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Secondly
, significant growth in population has many disadvantages for the environment. Linking Words
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, a recent statistical report published by United Nations shows that, If the current rate of deforestation continues, in 2050, there is a possibility that the temperature could rise above 60c in certain countries. If we could bring down the birth rates, we could certainly reduce environmental pollution.
In summary, controlling the birth rate have certain disadvantages,Linking Words
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, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, having only one Linking Words
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who prefer to have more freedom. Even though it may sound weird, we should educate families and Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...