You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Dear Amy, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am incredibly sorry for not having been in touch recently. Life has been a bit hectic. I am writing
this
letter in reply to your previous letter asking for my ideas about the
oven
that I bought
last
year. As you may still remember, I was fascinated by a Sony microwave
oven
when it was released. At the end of
last
year, I found David Jones provided a huge discount, so I purchased it immediately. Using
this
oven
really saves my time and energy. I no longer need to cook by myself as I always grill food in
this
oven
, which gives me a great deal of time to relax and do other things.
However
, I realize
this
oven
is quite difficult to clean.
For example
, after grilling meat
such
as steaks and lambs, it becomes particularly greasy, so I need to clean it on a regular basis. There are several alternative items you should consider.
First
of all, if your budget is up to 300 dollars, you are able to buy an air-fryer that has similar functions.
Furthermore
, Tiger produced a small size
oven
, which is quite portable and easy to clean. I hope my advice is useful for you. Drop me a line to let me know which one you consider purchasing. Best wishes, Nina
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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