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Todays schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree disaree with this statement?

#todays #schools #students #world #disaree
Nowadays, teaching
finance
for
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students
 has been
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 topical subject of
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debate. In
this
 regard, due to
increasing
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 importance of researching
economy
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, the opinion of the public is divided over whether
finance
 should be educated or not. Since various fields of
education
is
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 important for children, I partially agree with
this
 opinion.
To begin
 with, there is an appealing ground why taking
finance
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 course as an essential subject is
disadvantage
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 for
students
.
Cleary
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, studying about
economy
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the economy
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 is not the ultimate goal of
education
 because there are other important subjects that
students
 need to
study
. According to a recent survey, learning humanities like foreign
language
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 and philosophy was more helpful for the
students
 who get a job due to many
company's
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companies'
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 ethical standards.
Therefore
,
this
 offers strong proof that focusing on diverse subjects is
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necessary
neccessary
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necessary
 for the learners
instead
 of
obtaing
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obtaining
 financial
education
 as default. Despite
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the abovementioned views, I contend that learning how to survive financially is beneficial to
students
 due to educational efficiency.
First
, by learning
finance
,
students
 can manage their budget more effectively since learning experiences
such
 as taking courses, personal
study
,
studying
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and studying
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abroad
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aborad
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abroad
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 cost money.
For example
, one shows that
number
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a number
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 of
students
 who got financial
education
 showed better managing
thier
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their
 money for buying
study
- materials due tose their savings.
Second
,
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the basic
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basic
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basics
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 of
finance
 including
mathmatic
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mathematic
mathematics
Mathematica
 can be utilized
to
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 student's
study
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studies
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 as well as
daily
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 life.
For instance
,
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the person
a person
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person
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people
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 who get
mathmatic
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mathematic
mathematics
course
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courses
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 were not only able to use their in-depth knowledge to develop their science theory, but
also
 used it for purchasing daily goods based on planning their budget.
Hence
, learning
finance
 can hit
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two birds with one stone since it is effective for
students
 in both
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, in daily life and school experience. To sum up,
although
 there are various theories that
students
 need to
study
, I
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definitely
definately
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definitely
 believe that schools should
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deliver
deliever
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deliver
 financial knowledge to their
students
 which can make their life
as
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bed
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 of roses.
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