You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

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Dear John, How are you? How is life treating you? I know you have asked me about my recent purchase of an LG Air conditioner for my home. Sorry I haven't been able to write to you

last

week as I was overwhelmed with exams. Let me tell you about it in

this

letter. As you know the weather where I live is very hot and the summers are unbearable. I had no other option but to buy an AC to survive

this

climate. So I ordered two LG Split ACs for two bedrooms from the Amazon website. It was a great deal as huge discounts were offered across all electronic gadgets and purchasing two ACs got me an extra 5 per cent discount. The product comes with 15 years of warranty, with free servicing every 6 months for three years. I think

this

was a significant investment. There are many other reasonable alternatives as well in the market if you are planning to buy one. If you are going with only one purchase you can check competitors' brands like Lloyd and Samsung.

Furthermore

, Amazon is offering an exchange offer for Samsung gadgets which will

further

reduce your cost. I hope the above details will help you in making your purchasing decision. Do let me know what you think. Warm regards, Julie

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