You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter complaining about this to the landlord. In your letter: • explain the situation • describe why it bothers you • suggest a solution

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letter to request you to kindly give me some extra time to pay the rent to you. As you know for the

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ten years, I am your tenant and I have successfully paid the rent on time always. I have never created any nuisance for you or the neighbours around. Owing to the warmth of our bond, I am expecting you to kindly cooperate with me in

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situation. Due to some uncertain circumstances, I lost my current job due to the recession I was terminated from the job which I had with Cerner Pvt. Ltd. The Salary would be put on hold as I will get the amount as a full and final settlement after 45 days from

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working date which is June 25. I promise to pay the complete pending dues with the rent for the new month on June 26. Your cooperation during our tough times will be highly appreciated. Yours Sincerely Vishak V S

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

164 words

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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter complaining about this to the landlord. In your letter: • explain the situation • describe why it bothers you • suggest a solution

The Greeting

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

some people think that competition at work, at school and daily life is good thing. othersbelieve that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that to give opportunuties to the new generation, companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. Why is this law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?