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Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

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Being able to communicate with
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 another distinguishes us from the rest of the mammals living on the planet earth. While some people believe that
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 can speak fluently a new
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 unless
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 works and lives in a country where it is being spoken, others argue that
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 can learn a new
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 online easily. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument while I support the latter opinion. On the
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 hand, many people believe that learning a new
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 in a nation where the majority of people speak it can turn anyone into a fluent speaker.
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 is because of the fact that by doing
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 can develop to sound and speak like a native speaker.
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, an individual, who was born and bred in India, working abroad, let us say The UK, will sound more like an English speaker because of the exposure to conversing with native English speakers regularly, improving their pronunciation and vocabulary on a daily basis.
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, I would argue that
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 can learn any
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 locally provided that
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 has access to the internet. The reason for
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 is that an individual can learn any
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 online by signing up for lessons conducted by the native speakers themselves. To illustrate
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 point, there are numerous mobile applications which can allow an individual with internet facilities to learn a
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 of his choice with a click of a button. The flipside of
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, if
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 can only learn a new
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 by working abroad, many would hesitate to learn a new
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 because of unwillingness to reallocate. Having looked at both sides,
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 learning a new
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 in a country where it is being spoken can certainly turn a person into fluent in speaking, the same experience can be replicated in online sessions conducted by the faculties who are native speakers themselves.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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