The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
The advancement of tourism
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accounted Change the verb form
has
to
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for
English
becoming the most important language
globally. Some individuals believe that this
will result to
exclusive speaking of Change preposition
in
English
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the English
dialect
worldwide.
The benefits of English
being the spoken dialect
include effective communication
. If English
becomes the globally spoken language
, there will be easy communication
among individuals. Interacting with foreigners will be effortless, this
will lead to good
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the good
relationship
that would Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
have
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apply
emanate
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emanated
as a result
of language
barrier. Add an article
the language
a language
Additionally
, international trade will be encouraged. Tourist
going to trade in other countries will have trust in their customers. Fix the agreement mistake
Tourists
This
will improve socialization among tourists and the indigenous people.For instance
, when the whites come to a community in Nigeria, he mingles freely with the local people without thinking he is not from the nation.
However
, the downside of having English
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the English
language
as a major spoken language
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worldwide
world wide
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worldwide
include
cultural extinction and local Correct subject-verb agreement
includes
dialect
disappearance. With English
spoken globally, the local culture of various nations will vanish. This
will lead to adopting a new foreign culture that will take some times
to Fix the agreement mistake
time
adopt
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adapt
to
if Change preposition
apply
that is
possible. More so, the indigenous local dialect
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This
can affect communication
among the locals because the aged and unlearned people will be on the Replace the word
losing
loosing
side as it will take Correct your spelling
losing
sometime
for them to be familiar with the adopted Replace the word
some time
language
.
In conclusion, though having a global dialect
is good and will result in effective communication
but cultural extinction will affect the natives of the countries. In my view
the international communities should Add a comma
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English
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