The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.

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English
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becoming the most important
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globally. Some individuals believe that
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exclusive speaking of
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dialect
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worldwide. The benefits of
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being the spoken
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include effective
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becomes the globally spoken
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among individuals. Interacting with foreigners will be effortless,
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that would
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as a result
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barrier.
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, international trade will be encouraged.
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going to trade in other countries will have trust in their customers.
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will improve socialization among tourists and the indigenous people.
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, when the whites come to a community in Nigeria, he mingles freely with the local people without thinking he is not from the nation.
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, the downside of having
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as a major spoken
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cultural extinction and local
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disappearance. With
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spoken globally, the local culture of various nations will vanish.
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will lead to adopting a new foreign culture that will take some
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if
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will no longer be
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.
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among the locals because the aged and unlearned people will be on the
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side as it will take
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for them to be familiar with the adopted
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. In conclusion, though having a global
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is good and will result in effective
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but cultural extinction will affect the natives of the countries. In my
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the international communities should
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means of teaching other nations
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community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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