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Most countries do nol recYcle fheir wosle like poper, gross, ond oluminum cons. Why does fhis hoppen ond whol sleps con be loken lo encouroge recycling?

#countries #nol #fheir #wosle #poper #ond #oluminum #fhis #hoppen #whol #sleps #loken #encouroge
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, people feel that recycling consumes energy. They talk about the fuel needed to drive those ecycling trucks around carrying old newspapers from place to place. The cost involved in the
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recycling industry
 is much more than trash disposal at times. What they don't know is that even taking
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, there is a net benefit from recycling compared to landfill or incineration. The benefits to
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society from
 recycling compensate for any difference in cost. According to a current UK survey, the recycling
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of paper
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of paper
, glass, plastics,
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 and steel was estimated to save more than 18 million tonnes of
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carbon dioxide
 a year through avoided primary material production. People can be encouraged in many ways.
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aware
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aware
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 the benefits of recycling.
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integrating
 recycling into the high school educational system could
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 to recycle should be there.
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 a study it was seen that offering
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 for recycling can clearly contribute to increasing recycling rates, and almost a quarter of adults would be encouraged to recycle more frequently if they received a financial benefit.
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day
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 could be dedicated to recycling.
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, America Recycles Day (ARD) is a day dedicated to encouraging Americans to recycle and buy,recycled products. ARD is celebrated annually on November 15. Thousands of events are held across theU.S. to raise awareness about the importance of recycling and to encourage Americans to sign personal pledges to recycle and buy products made from recycled materials.
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