Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action

Dear MS Choi, Hello, refer to your

complain

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letter, I would like to reply

you

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to you

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and I would say

apologise

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to you for everything. I’m sorry about that. About my house, my living

room

is so nearby to your

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bedroom

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bed

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bedroom

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room

, so

that is

reasons

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what

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why

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you would

be feel

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feel

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we were noisy. I thought you might

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be in

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the sleeping

time

while we were still in

living

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the living

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room

. I’m sorry again. And recently my baby was coming just for 1 month, and my son who is 4 years old, maybe the noise

were appear

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appeared

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when they are playing together. Here

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are

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some action and response to you, and

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and my husband will take it as soon as possible, hope you don’t mind, and pls give us a bit

time

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of time

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to fix

this

problem.

First

, Our piano is in a living

room

, we

were

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decided which move to my bedroom,

hopefully

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the sound is less more.

Otherwise

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we are

settle

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the

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bedtime

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bed

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bedtime

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time

. Every Evening before 10:00pm that we will not stay in

living

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the living

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room

, and would

be prepare

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to back to

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each our

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our

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each

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bedroom

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bed

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bedroom

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room

This

is our decision to solve the noisy problem, and we want to invite you to come

our

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to our

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home for dinner

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Friday, we

sure

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are sure

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we will have a good

time

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Yours

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Your

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sincerely, Rose

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222 words

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with the advancement of knowledge and research in organic chemistry, people now are able to create different flavours and food additives that never existed before. what are benefits and drawbacks of such development?

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