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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action
Dear MS Choi, Hello, refer to your
complain
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 letter, I would like to reply
you
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to you
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 and I would say
apologise
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apologies
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 to you for everything. I’m sorry about that. About my house, my living
room
 is so nearby to your
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bedroom
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bed
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bedroom
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room
, so
that is
 a
reasons
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reason
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what
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why
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 you would
be feel
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feel
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 we were noisy. I thought you might
in
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be in
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 the sleeping
time
 while we were still in
living
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the living
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room
. I’m sorry again. And recently my baby was coming just for 1 month, and my son who is 4 years old, maybe the noise
were appear
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appeared
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 when they are playing together. Here
is
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are
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 some action and response to you, and
me
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I
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 and my husband will take it as soon as possible, hope you don’t mind, and pls give us a bit
time
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of time
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 to fix
this
 problem.
First
, Our piano is in a living
room
, we
were
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decided which move to my bedroom,
hopefully
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,hopefully
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 the sound is less more.
Otherwise
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,Otherwise
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 we are
settle
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settling
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 the
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bedtime
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bed
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bedtime
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time
. Every Evening before 10:00pm that we will not stay in
living
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room
, and would
be prepare
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be prepared
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 to back to
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each our
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our
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each
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bedroom
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bed
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bedroom
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room
.
This
 is our decision to solve the noisy problem, and we want to invite you to come
our
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to our
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 home for dinner
on
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next
 Friday, we
sure
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are sure
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 we will have a good
time
.
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Yours
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Your
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 sincerely, Rose
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