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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Ali, I hope you are well. I was happy when I heard the power electrical engineering course at Tehran University has been offered to you. I will be so glad if I can help you to find a place to live. During my studying, I lived in two different places.
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 semesters, I lived in the dormitory. After that, I rent a studio apartment with two of my classmates in a five-story building near the college. In my opinion, you can act the same as me. In fact, after six months or one year, you should make some friends who tend to rent a house with you. Unfortunately, some students do not choose suitable accommodation. Indeed, if you do not aware of people whom you want to hire an apartment with them, living will be hard for you.
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, you should do your best on finding a proper roommate. I would love to hear what is happening. Do not hesitate to call on me. Best wishes, Mohammad

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