Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. other say that there are more important environtal problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environment
issues have been the
common topic in public for 50 years, and different perspectives are a normal situation that can easily find in Correct article usage
a
surrounding
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the surrounding
of
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apply
life
. The loss of ecosystem
between plants
and animals
is one
of views
about Add an article
the views
environment
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environmental
problem
, but other factors can happen. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
thus
, I will explant both of them and include my own view.
First
of all, we realize that plants
and animals
have a balance of life
for human activities, especially in source of food and safety. It cannot be avoided in circle
of Add an article
the circle
a circle
life
because every existent
human will give Replace the word
existing
the
big impact Correct article usage
a
one
another in Change preposition
on one
environment
. Add an article
the environment
The humans
have to preserve Correct article usage
Humans
plants
for habitat
of Add an article
the habitat
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the animal
animal
, because Fix the agreement mistake
animals
of
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apply
this
way could support the
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human’s
safety from wild Change noun form
human
animals
which would come to public areas when they lost their home and ecosystem
between plant
and predator’s food. Fix the agreement mistake
plants
As a result
, people cannot reject that environment
will be safety
because of losing Replace the word
safe
ecosystem
between Correct article usage
the ecosystem
plants
and animals
.
On the other hand
, the
human activities are the main reason why the surrounding of our Correct article usage
apply
life
is not health
and adds another Replace the word
healthy
problem
like various pollutions
. Air pollution is Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
one
of examples
which people know well caused their habit Add an article
the examples
using
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of using
car
and waste Fix the agreement mistake
cars
factory
. Following Fix the agreement mistake
factories
this
cause, good
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a good
environment
will go out in our life
because this
problem
will invite other problems, such
as water pollution and limited source of healthy food from Add an article
the farm
a farm
farm
.
In my opinion, we have to do good action to keep Fix the agreement mistake
farms
good
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a good
environment
and avoid any negative impacts for
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on
environment
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the environment
especially
from our project to survive. Without Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
real action, anything ideas will Correct article usage
apply
do
not solve our environmental Unnecessary verb
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problem
like the above.
By way of conclusion, keeping Fix the agreement mistake
problems
ecosystem
between plans and Correct article usage
the ecosystem
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the animal
animal
will avoid danger for our surrounding Fix the agreement mistake
animals
of
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apply
life
and our activities is
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are
one
of the main impacts for the vital environmental problems. However
I believe we have to preserve both of them to avoid another Add a comma
,However
problem
will come in.Submitted by wittydrain on
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