Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Atul, Hope you are doing well. I am very happy when I heard that you have been offered by Pune
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for engineer course. I glad to see your accommodation near college area. I changed my stay twice during the study.
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, when I was a new student, I took admitted to the hostel for a stay after a few days I changed and shifted with two classmates
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apartment near campus. Living in a big apartment with all facility was made me pleasant. Same thing if you follow it will help you to save your time as well as money along with you will able to find a good house as per your test after 6 months. Once you start college make the same lovely buddy who can want to stay with you
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new place. As there
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to get accommodation
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as the internet and an app which can help you. Beware of fraud people, do not pay any money before taking any flat or accommodation in your control. I would love to hear what is happening, do not be afraid to call me. Best regards, Rohit
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