Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?
When creating a new town as a project, it is important to add
activities
that individuals could enjoy. Some believe that it is important to have a sports complex and different types of parks rather than a shopping complex. In my perspective, Use synonyms
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both of the ideas have their own advantages, I believe people will be more excited about the idea of building a complex and playgrounds.
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, most individuals would love to spend their Linking Words
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, it is healthy to be physically active as well. Linking Words
For example
, having a sports complex with a swimming pool, basketball court, badminton, table tennis and squash would certainly give plenty of options to spend their free Linking Words
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. Nowadays, most people spend hours in a gym, Use synonyms
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within the town.
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, playgrounds provide the option of doing Linking Words
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, outdoor courts, bicycle tracks and jogging tracks could keep help them to build up their bonds. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they could have picnics and relax while reading a book or listening to music. Linking Words
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but not least, families could use parks to have entertainment Linking Words
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such
as musical shows, plays and dramas. Even if it is during the day or night, a park could be used for many events.
Even though having a complex and recreation grounds could bring certain advantages, they could not provide the facilities with a shopping complex offers. Individuals spend Linking Words
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in a mall, especially when they want to buy something or to grab a meal at the food court. Those we could not count as Use synonyms
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, most playgrounds have food courts nowadays, and because of that, the Linking Words
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spent in complex shopping malls slowly declining.
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doing an activity with their family, so parks and complexes could be the best options. In my opinion, the advantages of providing a park and sports facilities outweigh the benefits of having shopping centres.Use synonyms
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