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Some people think that to be successful in sport you have to be physically strong However, other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion,

#people #sport #strength
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the availability of high-class physical
condition
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 is a key to achieving
sport
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 successes or whether
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psychological health is more powerful.
This
 essay will discuss both these points of view and argue
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favor
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 of the letter. On the one hand, without a perfect physical
condition
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 any athlete can not be the ace in their employment.
In other words
, the body is an object of
sportsperson
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a sportsperson
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, which could clearly illustrate the ability and experience of his
hard-work
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.
Moreover
, every possible
sport
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 competition requires a plethora of stamina in both the training and official game in all kinds of harsh weather conditions and that can only be possible when the individuals are perfectly fit.
For instance
, in football, players are required to be active for a long duration of hours in order to score goals and victory.
That is
 why to be successful at a sport every
sportsmen
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 should be curative.
On the other hand
, other parts of the community believe that mental health is playing
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 more fundamental role.
For example
, during
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 football match, sometimes
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players
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 are deeply struggled with mental obstacles
such
 as fear, feeling under pressure and others, which could easily emotionally
broke
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 the individual.
Moreover
, in
this
 case, they will not be able to survive, in spite of face, how physically gifted they are. To conclude, undoubtedly, being healthy is playing its part of importance, but,
however
, as far as I am concerned
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mental well-being is more vital
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 owning
physically
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a physically
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 fit body.
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