Some people think that to be successful in sport you have to be physically strong However, other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion,
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the availability of high-class physical
condition
is a key to achieving Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
sport
successes or whether Change the noun form
sports
the
psychological health is more powerful. Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will discuss both these points of view and argue Linking Words
on
Change preposition
in
favor
of the letter.
On the one hand, without a perfect physical Change the spelling
favour
condition
any athlete can not be the ace in their employment. Add a comma
,condition
In other words
, the body is an object of Linking Words
sportsperson
, which could clearly illustrate the ability and experience of his Add an article
a sportsperson
the sportsperson
hard-work
. Correct your spelling
hard work
Moreover
, every possible Linking Words
sport
competition requires a plethora of stamina in both the training and official game in all kinds of harsh weather conditions and that can only be possible when the individuals are perfectly fit. Change the noun form
sports
For instance
, in football, players are required to be active for a long duration of hours in order to score goals and victory. Linking Words
That is
why to be successful at a sport every Linking Words
sportsmen
should be curative.
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sportsman
On the other hand
, other parts of the community believe that mental health is playing Linking Words
way
more fundamental role. Add an article
a way
For example
, during Linking Words
the
football match, sometimes Correct article usage
a
player
are deeply struggled with mental obstacles Fix the agreement mistake
players
such
as fear, feeling under pressure and others, which could easily emotionally Linking Words
broke
the individual. Wrong verb form
break
Moreover
, in Linking Words
this
case, they will not be able to survive, in spite of face, how physically gifted they are.
To conclude, undoubtedly, being healthy is playing its part of importance, but, Linking Words
however
, as far as I am concerned Linking Words
the
mental well-being is more vital Correct article usage
apply
that
owning Correct your spelling
than
physically
fit body.Correct article usage
a physically
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