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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
In most of the world, global warming is rapid
to increase in
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 currently,
mostly
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 reasons to
people
 abandoning
rubbish
 quantity raising day by day. In
this
 essay, I will discuss a view of the points below. Correspondingly, one of the reasons
people
 are producing
rubbish
 due to we can buy low-cost things wherein clothes, household items, home appliances, furniture and mobile phone. Despite
people
 paying attention to advocating bringing out green environment consciousness, materialism is inevitably linked to
people
's impulse buying. Industrial consistently produce more and more products.
Furthermore
,
people
 used to consume garbage would be easier to abandon.
In addition
, to according
this
 occasion governments do to help reduce for a different angle. Whereas domination and tight control is needed. Throw away massive furniture cost collection. Plastic bag charging scheme to customers in supermarkets. Numerous suggestions our governments can help to decrease the amount of
rubbish
. To be the conclusion, establishing city
people
 reduce the amount of
rubbish
 produced is not easy, it is harder to tackle the problem of enormous garbage every day. Throw away less, tighten control, charging scheme would be efficient to prevent pollution of the world.
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