You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir or Madam, Recently in the Montreal Today newspaper, I saw, that you are looking for a teacher who would be able to host classes for the community. I am interested in

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my main line of work is software development. I have a lot of experience in numerous technologies and I am eager to share my knowledge with your students. My course will be all about coding, the

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of applications and other IT stuff. The courses will not be long, I am planning to make a couple of sessions on each topic. Unfortunately, I do not have any teaching experience. On the flip side, I have prepared a lot of interns and I am proud of what the newcomers achieved.

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, I am delighted to contribute to the community and make our society are better one. Please let me know if I suit

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position and if you are willing to give me a chance to help you. Faithfully yours, Artem Altukhov.

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