Some people believe that money for education mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a certain school of thought who have the notion that funds for schooling should solely be used on good

computers

. Others opine that it would be ideal for it to be used on

teachers

.

This

essay shall endorse the latter notion.

However

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the two divergent views shall

be outline

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after which a meaningful conclusion shall be made. On

one

hand,

proper

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understanding of the concept is

one

of the many reasons individuals think

monies

should be used

on

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lectures. When the funds are used to

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lectures in a course and they understand very well, they can

then

inculcate them into the

children

for a better understanding. Admittedly, if

monies

are spent on

teachers

, it will go a long way to help

children

since they have someone to assist them in times of difficulty.

For example

, it was reported that

teachers

who went to Dubai for the 5 days

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on

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health are back and supporting students in that field with their research.

On the other hand

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form of learning is

one

of the main reasons people believe

monies

should be spent on better

computers

. When

children

have

this

gadget at hand, they can learn

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their own comfort and have a wide range of materials to study from by the click of a button. Even though, if

monies

are used on

computers

children

will have a lot of materials to refer from, that

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they may lack guidance in helping them identify which of them is best and can help them.

For instance

, it was published that about 90% of students who were doing

e- learning

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failed totally in their exams because they did not understand most of the materials given and had no

one

to explain to them. In

conclusion

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after assessing the two divergent views, it is felt that

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spending

monies

on

teachers

has a lot of benefits

than on

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buying

the

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computers

which some students cannot even operate without a

teachers

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. I will

therefore

recommend that the government should ensure more funds are allocated for lectures to continue to study as they will come back to support the younger generations.