Some people believe that money for education mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a certain school of thought who have the notion that funds for schooling should solely be used on good
computers
. Others opine that it would be ideal for it to be used on teachers
. This
essay shall endorse the latter notion. However
the two divergent views shall Add a comma
,However
be outline
after which a meaningful conclusion shall be made.
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one
hand, proper
understanding of the concept is Add an article
a proper
the proper
one
of the many reasons individuals think monies
should be used on
lectures. When the funds are used to Change preposition
in
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lectures in a course and they understand very well, they can Correct your spelling
sponsor
then
inculcate them into the children
for a better understanding. Admittedly, if monies
are spent on teachers
, it will go a long way to help children
since they have someone to assist them in times of difficulty. For example
, it was reported that teachers
who went to Dubai for the 5 days training
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of training
environment
health are back and supporting students in that field with their research.
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On the other hand
easy
form of learning is Correct article usage
an easy
one
of the main reasons people believe monies
should be spent on better computers
. When children
have this
gadget at hand, they can learn at
their own comfort and have a wide range of materials to study from by the click of a button. Even though, if Change preposition
in
monies
are used on computers
children
will have a lot of materials to refer from, that not withstanding
they may lack guidance in helping them identify which of them is best and can help them. Correct your spelling
notwithstanding
For instance
, it was published that about 90% of students who were doing e- learning
failed totally in their exams because they did not understand most of the materials given and had no Correct your spelling
e-learning
one
to explain to them.
In conclusion
after assessing the two divergent views, it is felt thatAdd a comma
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,
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apply
monies
on teachers
has a lot of benefits than on
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over
the
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apply
computers
which some students cannot even operate without a teachers
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teacher's
guide
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therefore
recommend that the government should ensure more funds are allocated for lectures to continue to study as they will come back to support the younger generations.Submitted by agozie2018 on
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