Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

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Dear Ahmet I am writing to you to complain because there are some reasons. You have so

much

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animals in your backyard and

this

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is a problem for me .

First

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of all , my name is Furkan Oz and ı live with my sister

and

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apply

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home

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number is the 205 number

that is

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near your

home

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. As you know , you have three

dogs

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and two cats.The cats are not a problem because they live in your

home

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but the

dogs

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are very

problem

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because they live in your backyard. They sometimes come to my garden and they always eat my meats which are delicious. I can suggest two solutions if you want.

first

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one , you can bind your

dogs

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in your

home

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when you are not at

home

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other idea

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another idea

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you

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is you

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can keep your

dogs

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inside the house. I hope , you can solve these problems and we are able to

happy

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be happy

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again. I look forward to catching up with you soon Yours Faithfully Furkan Oz

Submitted by furkan_fener_03 on Mon Jul 25 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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