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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world.

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Tourism has brought so many good and bad things to the world today and
one
 of the major things it has impacted on the
people
 is the speaking of the English
language
 which has now become so obvious that
this
language
 is the major
one
 being spoken in the whole nation.
This
 essay will state the merits and demerits of having a particular dialect in the universe.
Firstly
, the advantage of having
one
language
 in the world is that it will help
people
 to communicate easily and understand each other when conversing.
Furthermore
, it will help in finding a job easily. More so,if
one
language
 is being spoken internationally,it will help
people
 in travelling from
one
 place to another if they so desire.
For instance
, the English
language
 has been
one
 of the dialects that are well known globally by
people
. Even a child
that is
 born today knows how to speak it whereas the child has not been enrolled in school.
Secondly
, the disadvantages were that it will make individuals forget their culture and the nation they come from because they will dwell so much in learning about
this
 particular dialect and their way of life. Again,it will be difficult for
one
 to be easily identified like if
one
language
 is been spoken globally,
people
's mother tongue will become thing of the past.
However
, individuals will not like to travel again because some
people
 travel in other to learn another
language
.
For example
,a friend of mine that knew how to speak french very well declined his admission into a famous university in France because he wanted to learn another
language
 apart from french. In conclusion, having
one
language
 nationwide brings about unity and helps in building a good rapport between individuals and countries.
However
, having a particular dialect can make
people
 forget who they are and where they come from.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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