Many wild birds and animals live in towns and cities. Some people think that the wildlife should be protected. Some think that they should be removed. Discuss both views and give your opinion
As humans
are
developed and Unnecessary verb
apply
population
is increasing, they Add an article
the population
cutdown
the trees and woods for more land to live, due to Correct your spelling
cut down
this
many wild animals are losing their home
and go into deep woods but some animals did not move and they try to live Fix the agreement mistake
homes
or
some time visit in Correct your spelling
for
towns
and cities
. Many people
debut that this
wildlife should be protected and other
forcing that they should not allow in Correct pronoun usage
others
cities
and should be removed.
On the one hand, there are some peoples, who want to protect wildlife and argue that human has stills
the land and treat Change the verb form
stilled
as
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it as
it
is Correct word choice
if it
there
ownCorrect your spelling
their
,
when it is part of mother earth and we should share the land. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, people
are destroying their home
and as Fix the agreement mistake
homes
a
effect, many animal species losing their population and Change the article
an
about
to extinct. For Add a missing verb
are about
an
instant, many small Correct article usage
apply
town
are created near Change to a plural noun
towns
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Gir jungle Correct article usage
the Sasan
it
effect Correct pronoun usage
which
on
loins, many Change preposition
apply
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
the
visit the nearby Correct your spelling
they
towns
for
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to
hunt
.
Correct article usage
a hunt
On the other hand
, many people
want to remove wild animals from towns
and cities
because there are many incidents happen
when wild Correct pronoun usage
that happen
animal
kill Fix the agreement mistake
animals
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
and take the
small children. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, they kill cattle also
and many time
they get to much wild and distorted the properties. Fix the agreement mistake
times
For example
, there are
Change the verb form
is
town
where leopard kills the child and sometimes wild elephant enter into
Change preposition
apply
town
and destroy the
house and public property.
In my opinion, we should Correct article usage
apply
the
protect the wild lives because they are part of Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
our
out
home planet and Correct your spelling
our
it
are essential in Correct pronoun usage
they
food
chain. Add an article
the food
However
, I Correct your spelling
believe
belive
that, if do not Correct your spelling
believe
distory
their homes and we build Correct your spelling
destroy
distort
town
and Fix the agreement mistake
towns
cities
where they are not living. so they will never come to towns
.
To conclude, some people
want to protect then
wildlife because,
they are part of nature and they are necessary for Remove the comma
apply
balance
of nature. WhileAdd an article
the balance
,
other Remove the comma
apply
people
are concern
about Wrong verb form
concerned
safety
of Add an article
the safety
people
and cattle and they want to remove from
Correct pronoun usage
them from
towns
and cities
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