Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. do you agree or disagree?

In today's,
world
people are more towards the internet the moment they wake up from bed they use the internet to check messages and any flashy news we can't imagine a
world
without it
moreover
most people are reading news through cyberspace. In the
further
paragraph I'll be discussing will the newspaper still be the main source to read the news and the reasons. To start the
world
is changing rapidly technology advancements are happening at a rapid speed and pupils are
also
adapting to new tech
additionally
the percentage of pupils reading reports in cyberspace has been increasing daily today more than 50% of the population is reading through the network
for instance
in past the public use to rely on newspapers to read the article and incidents happened but today the innovation of A.I changed the perception of the public by making the report available on the network.
In contrast
, making a newspaper takes lots of time and paper to make the main reason why it won't be the source of reports because of the time it takes to publish
for example
to print a paper report takes a day which means the message gets delayed by a day
on the other hand
if we look at cyberspace it takes few minutes to publish
furthermore
there might be chances of leak meaning information to printed early before its released. To conclude I completely disagree with the statement in the near future humans will listen to reports while going to work in the form of A.R or V.R
world
.
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