Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. They believe this would benefit teenagers and the society.What is your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

A number of persons believe that youngsters ought to do unsalaried

jobs

in their locality during their spare time, with the view that it would be of great use to them and the

society

. In my opinion, I believe that volunteering

jobs

is

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necessary.(pls add your ideas in your introduction) There are several reasons why doing

jobs

without pay in

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society

is important. To start with, it makes them more knowledgeable in fields other

then

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their regular school activities.

This

is to say that (remove

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such

jobs

exposes

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them to areas their school curriculum does not cover.

For instance

, participating in the planting of trees in the environment exposes young people more to the practical aspect of agriculture.

Secondly

, it gives

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then

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opportunity to meet and interact with new people from different walks of life.

In other words

, community services

breeds

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exposure.✅✅

Furthermore

, free works in

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society

prepare teens for later life.

This

is because, they may have gained more experience and learnt more

of

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interpersonal

relationship

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,

hence

getting a job later in life and carrying out

team work

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approach in their job will be easier for them.

Lastly

, it helps to keep them busy during their spare

times

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, preventing them from engaging in harmful or delinquent behaviour in

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society

.

In other words

,

crime

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rate is reduced within that region.

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, a child that volunteers in his locality during his free periods rarely

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the luxury of time to identify with drug dealers or criminals in his community.✅✅ In

conclusion

, many

persons

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opined that the young ones should make use of their less busy time in doing voluntary works in their vicinity, that it would not only be profitable to them but

also

to the

society

, and I strongly agree

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this

.(rephrase your

conclusion

) You tried It was an interesting one Kudos

However

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conclusion

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