Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?
In
this
modern era , Some people believe that having a degree
from a reputed university helps to get a job easily. I partially agree with this
statement and In this
essay, I will explain apart from education
other skills
are also
required to get a good job in this
competitive market
.
To begin
with , No doubt education
plays a vital role in human life. Education
teaches us how to live and behave in society. Nowadays, Students working hard to get admission to esteemed schools. Moreover
, Pupils are taking extra tuition and classes to enrol in a good university. In addition
, a Degree
is required to remain sustainable in the market
because theoretical knowledge is also
important for children.For instance
, Students can't apply for coding and developer jobs without an engineering degree
. Because most of the corporates need a degree
for all positions whether it is in medical , engineering or any position in a different field .
Secondly
, As I mentioned earlier, Apart from a degree
,there are other skills
also
required for the job such
as communication skills
, presentation skills
, and soft-spoken and proactive. For example
,a salesperson can not convince the customer without good communication .In addition
, If a marketing person speaks rude and harsh language ,then
it will ruin the image of the company. so far company will terminate such
employees with immediate effect.
To conclude
, Education
is important to sustain in the market
but other skills
are also
required for an immense opportunity in the market
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Task Response
Be sure to fully address the question prompt and provide a clear opinion. While you partially agree, elaborating on the extent of your agreement with pertinent examples will strengthen your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph is clearly linked to your overall response to the question prompt. Use a range of cohesive devices to show the relationship between ideas.
Task Response
Provide more specific examples to support your main points. This will aid in demonstrating the relevance of your argument to the reader and strengthen the overall essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop main points fully by providing detailed explanations. The reader should have a clear understanding of how each point supports your opinion and relates back to the essay question.