You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter to express some of my suggestions, which may improve our college
cafeteria
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seating arrangement. I am a student, Utsav, from the A-127 batch, studying Economics. My student ID is 456-RYD.
To begin
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with, I am fond of the state-of-art facilities offered by the
cafeteria
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,
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as smart chairs and tables.
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to that, I believe, the new wall design is fabulous. That being said, it came to my notice recently that a lot of students eat while standing in the
cafeteria
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during lunchtime because of improper seating
arrangement
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.
As a result
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of
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, many students, including myself, do not enjoy their meals on a regular basis and others eat outside the campus at local restaurants. In the wake of
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problem, I would like you to add ample chairs and tables in the
cafeteria
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that can accommodate students during lunch hours and tea breaks. I am certain that you would consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Utsav Chandel

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