You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express some of my suggestions, which may improve our college
cafeteria
seating arrangement. I am a student, Utsav, from the A-127 batch, studying Economics. My student ID is 456-RYD.
To begin
with, I am fond of the state-of-art facilities offered by the
cafeteria
,
such
as smart chairs and tables.
In addition
to that, I believe, the new wall design is fabulous. That being said, it came to my notice recently that a lot of students eat while standing in the
cafeteria
during lunchtime because of improper seating
arrangement
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.
As a result
of
this
, many students, including myself, do not enjoy their meals on a regular basis and others eat outside the campus at local restaurants. In the wake of
this
problem, I would like you to add ample chairs and tables in the
cafeteria
that can accommodate students during lunch hours and tea breaks. I am certain that you would consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Utsav Chandel
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