You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency.

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well. My name is Daisy, and I am writing to formally request that I need to leave the flat two months early. I have carefully considered the need to leave the house

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of the contract, and after thorough consideration, I believe that I will leave the apartments until the contract. I understand that

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may not be easy because you do not only have

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issue, but so many, and I am open to discussing ways to address these issues collaboratively. I am confident that by doing we both can benefit from its results, and I believe that it will not be much of a problem, and it would have a positive impact on our progress. Thank you for taking the time to review my request. I am more than willing to provide any additional clarification if needed. I look forward to the possibility of fulfilling my request and appreciate your attention to

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matter. Yours faithfully, Daisy

Teo HalimovSun Dec 29 2024

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Task Achievement

Try to make your main request clearer and more direct by stating early why you need to leave the flat early and what specific help you are expecting from the agency.

Coherence and Cohesion

Divide the letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on one aspect: introduction, reason for leaving, potential solutions, and conclusion.

Task Achievement

The letter's tone is polite and respectful, which is suitable for a formal letter to an agency.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately used, giving a formal touch to the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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