People in cities often do not interact with their neighbors and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions?
The mankind
has needed Correct article usage
Mankind
generating
Change the verb form
to generate
energy
for Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an easer
easer
life than Correct your spelling
easier
preceding
ages. Especially, after the industrial revolution, electronic devices provide Change preposition
in preceding
to
Change preposition
apply
humanity
Use synonyms
beneficial
opportunities Change preposition
with beneficial
such
as Linking Words
car
, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
telephone
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telephones
and
, tv. Correct word choice
apply
On the other hand
, when the factories produce these things, they cause many harmful effects on nature because of using fossil Linking Words
fuels
. Use synonyms
This
circumstance can be called “the cost of comfortable life”. Nowadays, particularly Linking Words
european
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European
countries
struggle Use synonyms
alteration
their method of Change preposition
to alteration
energy
generating distinguishingly renewable Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
sources
like wind. Use synonyms
Although
some Linking Words
countries
insist Use synonyms
using
fossil Change preposition
on using
fuels
, many Use synonyms
researches
show that retainable Change the wording
types of research
pieces of research
kinds of research
energy
Use synonyms
sources
submit more habitable environment. In fact, these Use synonyms
sources
that produce Use synonyms
energy
, have two main benefits: maintainability and clean Use synonyms
air
.
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Begin
with, Wrong verb form
Beginning
humanity
has been using products of oil since antiquity. Consumption of these outputs increased unprecedentedly after the industrial age and mankind Use synonyms
faced
with probability Add a missing verb
was faced
depletion
of Change preposition
of depletion
sources
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that
cited above. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Therefore
, especially developed Linking Words
countries
started the examinations that they tried Use synonyms
overcaming
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overcoming
energy
problem. Use synonyms
Finally
, they found two Linking Words
solution
for generating Change to a plural noun
solutions
the
Correct article usage
apply
energy
. One of them was nuclear Use synonyms
power
which had many Use synonyms
danger
for human life. Fix the agreement mistake
dangers
Other
, Correct pronoun usage
Another
also
most acceptable, Linking Words
option
was renewable Add an article
the option
an option
energy
Use synonyms
that
means benefiting sun or wind Correct pronoun usage
which
power
. To illustrate, Germany has decreased Use synonyms
consumption
of fossil Correct pronoun usage
its consumption
fuels
as well Use synonyms
using
nuclear Correct word choice
as using
power
and has focused Use synonyms
developing
clear Change preposition
on developing
power
systems like wind farms and solar panels. In the same way, several developed Use synonyms
countries
have Use synonyms
tendency
Correct article usage
a tendency
progress
the maintainable Fix the infinitive
to progress
energy
framework due to unlimited using opportunities of these Use synonyms
sources
.
Another benefit of using renewable Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
sources
is generating Use synonyms
power
without harming Use synonyms
to
nature. Consumption of fossil Change preposition
apply
fuels
Use synonyms
show
that using Change the verb form
shows
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
sources
cause Use synonyms
air
pollution. Use synonyms
In contrast
, producing Linking Words
power
with renewable Use synonyms
energy
systems aid Use synonyms
to
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apply
humanity
Use synonyms
for
keeping clear the Change preposition
in
air
. Use synonyms
For instance
, many Linking Words
country
which Change to a plural noun
countries
are
realized Change the verb form
is
harmful
effects of using fossil Correct article usage
the harmful
fuels
Use synonyms
,
made Remove the comma
apply
an
treaty called Change the article
a
Paris
Climate Agreement that aims decreasing Correct article usage
the Paris
level
of greenhouse gas which is related to using fossil Correct article usage
the level
fuels
. Use synonyms
Thus
, one can conclude that renewable Linking Words
energy
can be Use synonyms
only
solution for Add an article
the only
prevention
of Correct article usage
the prevention
air
pollution.
To conclude, using renewable Use synonyms
energy
can help Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
apply
humanity
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for
two main aspects that Change preposition
in
involves
retainability and avoiding pollution. In spite of useful opportunities, establishing farms that generate Change the verb form
involve
clear
Correct your spelling
clean
energy
, Use synonyms
necessitate
large budges. Correct subject-verb agreement
necessitates
Nevertheless
, it seems that mankind should choose clear Linking Words
power
Use synonyms
sources
for future generations rather than think merely Use synonyms
today
.Change preposition
about today
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