Some people think that using animal for experimental purpose is cruel but other people think it is necessary for development of science Discuss both views and give your opinion

I believe that experimentation on
animals
is totally flawed. In the
first
place, a group of entities will lose their right to natural life and death. They will be confined in laboratories, unable to experience the challenges of their natural habitat and living their entire lives in a laboratory. In countless examples, laboratory mice cannot die naturally
as a result
of humanity's selfishness.
Second
, some
experiments
affect the nature of some
animals
widely and permanently. The genetic
experiments
performed by scientists are a necessary component of their research.
However
, changing the genetic structure of cows,
for example
, in order to breed or raise them, may cause irreversible harm to them.
Thirdly
, there are several
species
of
animals
that are being exterminated by profiteers and traffickers. It seems to be only because scientific
centers
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are in desperate need of gaining access to those rare specific
species
for their space research and are willing to pay whatever it takes. Taking the case of space travel and interacting with the infinite space outside the atmosphere, animal
species
are on the verge of extinction due to illegal hunting.
On the other hand
, human
experiments
using
animals
are
also
justified in the opinion of some people who believe they are necessary in order to help countless people around the globe.
Although
it is acknowledged that
animals
may be employed to some extent to meet
this
need because it is less costly both materially and spiritually, humans cannot sacrifice the advancement of science; and some
species
such
as mice may be multiplied in laboratories if they have the necessary reproductive power. Even so, it is obvious that there are no limits and controls on the number and kind of
experiments
being done just to satisfy human indulgence in
this
area. The goal is not only the expansion of science, so these
experiments
are being conducted on living beings without supervision, and in essence,
animals
suffer from mankind's unlimited desires.
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