Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Railways

are necessary for some public

transportation

such

as

high speed

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railway

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railways

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,

train

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trains

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and

subway

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.

Besides

, I strongly agree that

government

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spendmoney

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spend money

spends money

on

railways

instead

of roads. From my point of

view

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there

are

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two main

reason

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.

Firstly

is about

the

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global warming.

Secondly

is about

residents

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security.

Moreover

, I will discuss some details in the following paragraph. On one hand,

the

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global

gloval

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global

warming

are

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getting more and more serious now.

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, the

government

in

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many

mnay

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many

different countries set up some

policy

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to deal with

this

problem.The main way to solve

this

situation is

reduce

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the

ammount

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amount

of owner

vehicle

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vehicles

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.

This

way can decrease

the

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carbon emission.

Furthermore

,

government

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can

spent

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more money on

railways

to let

people

feel more

satisfy

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or convenient than before. If most

of

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people

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the people

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choose to take public

transportation

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drive

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their own car, the air

pullution

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pollution

will improve effectively and obviously

On the other hand

,

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focus on the

frequent

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of

people

take

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public

transportation

.

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,

their

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are many

aspect

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influence

people

choose

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the

transportation

they use.

For

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my perspective opinion, the margin of safety is the

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most

mos

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important point to

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resident

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.

Government

should pay more money on

railways

to make them more strengthen.

In addition

, set up more emergency response

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measures

meansures

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measures

.

Increase

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and

upgrade

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upgrading

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these equipment

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will make

people

feel more

safety

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safe

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.

Moreover

, the time

of

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they take train or subway must increase more than before In conclusion, I

think

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spend

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spending

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more money on

railways

rather than roads

have

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some advantages. Like, environment friendly and the number of times that

people

take public

transportation

rise