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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

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In our human society, we have a lot of countries, each of which has different cultural customs.
However
,
music
 to which everyone can easily listen is one thing bringing
people
 from different countries cultures, and ages together. It is obvious that every
country
 in the world has its own kind of
music
. In some cases,
people
 from another
country
 can listen to that song.
That is
 an opportunity for the government to introduce and advertise their
country
. We can easily see that in songs. Plus, they will use lots of musical instruments in their
music
 video (MV). Above all, they can film the scenic spots in their
country
. It will be an occasion for them to spread the things that stand out in their cultures.
For instance
, in Korea, K-pop is extremely prevalent. In fact, Korean
people
 can bring their melody and their nation out of the
country
 through their
music
. Previously,
people
 wouldn’t know about Korean culture unless travelled. But until now, because of K-pop’s popularity,
people
 in the world can easily approach Korean society. To sum up, each
country
 has its kind of
music
 and it will change more and more in the future generations.
That is
 the reason why
music
 is the best way of bringing
people
 of different cultures and ages together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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