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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Restaurants
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 that serve fast
food
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 for reasonable prices are widespread lately around the world.
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 they may be the cheapest option and their services are preferable to most
people
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, they can cause extreme long-term effects on
people
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’s health. An unhealthy diet is a preferable option because of the quick service and reasonable price.
People
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 on a budget would probably buy fast
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 because it is cheaper, as well as its availability 24 hours a day. Take as an example, if
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 work at night shift, they would only find one or two fast
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restaurants
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 open late at night;
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, they would probably be in a situation where they can not find another option to eat.
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, when I was studying at a college
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 far away around two hours from my hometown, the only choice I had
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 eat at the nearest fast
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restaurants
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.
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, an unhealthy lifestyle can cause excessive effects. Research has proven that
people
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 who eat fast
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 on regular bases are the most predictable to gain a lot of weight. Diseases,
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 as diabetes, are resulting from unhealthy habits. Another disadvantage would be transforming these diseases into the
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 generations.
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, there is a possibility that parents who have diabetes would be passing
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 disease to their children. In conclusion, it is becoming widespread that fast
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restaurants
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 are the most popular eating options in many countries. Despite their cheap prices and availabilities, their negative effects outweigh their advantages. Individuals should be aware of the long-term impact of their unhealthy habits;
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, the government should take a serious step in order to minimise
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 issue.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread availability
  • accessibility
  • nutritional value
  • health implications
  • obesity
  • heart disease
  • traditional cooking
  • local cuisines
  • plastic waste
  • environmental impact
  • employment opportunities
  • economic boost
  • time-saving
  • convenience
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