Men and women are capable of doing all job equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Before the era of
today
,
men
believed that the only place a
woman
is meant to be is only in the kitchen and birthing
of
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children.
women
then
are not
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the opportunity to attend
to
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college, their parents are of the belief that training girls in school
is
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waste
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a waste
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of
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resources
resourses
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resources
and time. But
today
, with
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global advancement, things
has
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turned
to
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be better for
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women
in
this
21st century in society. thanks to
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few
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women
like Frances Wright , and Margaret Fuller who advocated for the importance
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women
should be
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the opportunity to study and experience the four walls of the school.
Furthermore
, education has changed the narratives of
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certain
certains
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certain
things
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respect to
women
not
allowed
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to pursue their future dreams and careers.
Also
, in
today
's century,
women
and
men
are capable of carrying out equal
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responsibilities
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both at
work
and
home
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at home
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. some
women
even
work
more hard
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than the
men
of
today
. Education and the level of exposure to advancement
has
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made
the
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women
to
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feel their importance in
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society.
for
instance
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women
now compete with
men
in politics and at
work places
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workplaces
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,
women
are seen as the weaker vessels but NO not anymore. In a case
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serum
, where a
man
and
woman
is
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working and
at
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long
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run the
man
losses his job everyone will
depended
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on the
woman
for family needs till the
man
gets to feet,
this
is to show that both individual need each other, no one should be treated less.
also
in as much as nature has empowered
men
with the ideology of
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the head
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in charge
incharge
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in charge
of their families and society as well. in another case whereby the
man
is no more presently leaving with the kids and their mother, the
woman
will strive so hard to see that the basic need of the children
are
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available. Again,
women
and
men
work
together as a team in many
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companies
compaines
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companies
and organisations in other to promote teamwork. with
this
advancement,
men
and
women
have
benefit
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to
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equal distribution of power and influence,have equal opportunities for financial
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independence
indepence
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independence
through
work
and setting up businesses,
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equal access to education and the opportunity to develop personal ambitions and
interest
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. In conclusion,
man
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men
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and
woman
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women
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should have
equal
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an equal
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job
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jobs
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for better
interest
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interests
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. .
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