Before the era of
today
,
men
believed that the only place a
woman
is meant to be is only in the kitchen and birthing
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children.
women
then
are not
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the opportunity to attend
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college, their parents are of the belief that training girls in school
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of
and time. But
today
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global advancement, things
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turned
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be better for
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women
in
this
21st century in society. thanks to
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few Correct quantifier usage
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women
like Frances Wright , and Margaret Fuller who advocated for the importance
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women
should be
givingChange the form of the verb
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the opportunity to study and experience the four walls of the school.
Furthermore
, education has changed the narratives of
things
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respect to
women
not
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to pursue their future dreams and careers.
Also
, in
today
's century,
women
and
men
are capable of carrying out equal
responsibilityFix the agreement mistake
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both at
work
and
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. some
women
even
work
more hardReplace the words
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than the
men
of
today
. Education and the level of exposure to advancement
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made
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women
to Change the verb form
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feel their importance in
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society.
for
women
now compete with
men
in politics and at
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,
women
are seen as the weaker vessels but NO not anymore. In a case
, where a
man
and
woman
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working and
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run the
man
losses his job everyone will
dependedChange the verb form
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on the
woman
for family needs till the
man
gets to feet,
this
is to show that both individual need each other, no one should be treated less.
also
in as much as nature has empowered
men
with the ideology of
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the head
of their families and society as well. in another case whereby the
man
is no more presently leaving with the kids and their mother, the
woman
will strive so hard to see that the basic need of the children
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available.
Again,
women
and
men
work
together as a team in many
and organisations in other to promote teamwork. with
this
advancement,
men
and
women
have
benefitAdd an article
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toChange preposition
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equal distribution of power and influence,have equal opportunities for financial
through
work
and setting up businesses,
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equal access to education and the opportunity to develop personal ambitions and
interestFix the agreement mistake
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.
In conclusion,
manFix the agreement mistake
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and
womanFix the agreement mistake
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should have
equalAdd an article
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jobFix the agreement mistake
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for better
interestFix the agreement mistake
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.
.