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Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it? what do you think are the main causes of this problem abd what measures could be taken to solve it ?

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, the rate of
people
 who lose
jobs
 and homes is rising quickly in capital cities around the world. There are a few main reasons why
homelessness
 problems are getting serious and I will give my explanations and solutions.
First
 of all, higher competition
among
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 the employment environment makes it hard for
people
 to get a job. Compared to the past, modern employees need to have more
skills
 to enter the company successfully.
For example
, in the design industry, designers have to improve their
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software
softwares
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software
 of design
skills
 as technology progresses rapidly.
In contrast
, for senior
designers
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 it might be too difficult to learn new knowledge and
skills
 during older age.
Additionally
, they are at a disadvantage when looking for new
jobs
 because of their old age.
Thus
, they will lose their
jobs
.
Therefore
, the
government
 should draw out new schemes to help citizens to maintain their
jobs
 and accommodations.
For instance
, in Taiwan, the
government
 set up
jobs
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 institutions to guide these older jobless to learn new
skills
 for free.
Moreover
, the Taiwanese
government
also
 manages older grants for old
people
, despite losing
jobs
 that
also
 will receive the money to pay their
cost
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. Ｂesides financial support, the
government
 should concern
the
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metinal
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mental
 problems of
homelessness
 who have
addiction
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 to alcohol and drugs. They can build a relative group to help them quit these bad hobbies. In
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homelessness
 is an urgent issue
to
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 the governments of many countries. local governments should spend time and money to concern and help these
homelessness
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 who lose their
jobs
 and houses in an unwilling situation and attempt to prevent
people
 from becoming
homelessness
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homeless
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