Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that learning a foreign

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is only for work or travel in different regions. Others say there are some different purposes why people should learn the languages which are from other countries.

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issue has been discussed spreadly currently. From my point of view, there

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more than one reason to learn

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, some details will be discussed in the following paragraphs

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, from my point of view, learning a foreign

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can bring us some benefits.

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working and

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, I think

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can broaden our

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, we will be more and more globalization after we get to know more about foreign

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languages

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, we can make some friends from other places easily.

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, if tourists who

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from other

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come to Taiwan.

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or she face some question,

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as the building location or some culture shock, we can help them to solve problems. It can make some positive

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them. As for the other opinion

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paragraph, it

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untrue. On

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hand, learning

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make us

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find wonderful jobs more smoothly. Especially English and Japanese(In Taiwan).

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, if you can understand

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, you can have

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salary.

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, it

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convenient when you travel to other

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. You don't need to translate

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, go abroad with

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and face that the store

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you to pay more to purchase something. In conclusion, learning

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has many advantages. These two opinions are without a doubt correct.

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, I prefer the opinion that learning

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is not only for work or travel

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