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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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exams
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individuals
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also
 in many countries
exam
 form is
paper based
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 in spite of practical knowledge so
therefore
 many benefits and drawbacks
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also
 in
these
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details
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In all
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 over the world all individuals have
right
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 to learn anything so
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therefore
 they give any
exam
 for
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it self
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because
becuase
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because
 nowadays,
exams
 are taken by many colleges and schools
through
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online
also
 many
students
 like
this
 method , they
beleive
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believe
 it will be helped them for their study.
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pandemic
endemic
pendamic
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 all colleges and schools are closed so many
students
 passed by their practical skills . On the hand side , many problems
arrives
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 if
exams
 will be taken
to
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too
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 practically because many pupils have only practical
knowlege
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knowledge
inspite
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in spite
 of book and
class room
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 so they can easily
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 good
mark
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 in any subjects
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therefore
 many
students
 find if
they
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 not good in
presentation
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the presentation
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 so they not achieve their desire marks in any subjects .in
addtion
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addition
 , many
students
 passed their
exam
 without any preparation so in future they stuck in between many things ,
such
 as
writting
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writing
 letters and reports. In conclusion, both
form
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 of
exams
 are indispensable not only for
students
 but
also
it
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 will be very
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important
imporatnt
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important
 for society and
countries
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 development. So
that
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only giving
practical
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the practical
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exam
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exams
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 is not very beneficial for every
students
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student
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