In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Fully explain your ideas

you and some friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you wre very pleased with the food and sevise.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

many parts of the world people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home . this is bad because home cooked food is much better for us to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?