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differences between countries become less evident each year. nowadays, all over the world people share same fashion, advertising brand, food habits and tv channels. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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With the growth of media nowadays, the world has become a small town where
people
 across countries share the same habits and styles.
Although
 the similarities can benefit and enhance cross-cultural communication,
this
 can result in
people
 losing interest in tourism. The impact of media results in
people
 having sort of the same lifestyle. Similarities across
cultures
 would make communication easier, as
people
 are familiar with the international norms and standards.
For instance
, if
people
 study abroad, contacting their other counterparts would not cause an excessive problem.
Moreover
, the negative impact of stereotypes would be reduced
as a result
 of
people
 wearing and talking in the same way. Take as an example, tourists sometimes get abused out of their religion or nationality.
Therefore
, similarities can minimise the effect of stereotypes.
However
, differences are a good interactive way to attract tourists.
People
 are more likely to be amazed by watching different
cultures
 and traditions.
Besides
, presenting and living these
cultures
 is the only way to transform them for the
next
 generations.
For example
, the fact that some old vocabularies are not familiar anymore is because of language changes. Recently, the language we use as well as the traditions we live are replaced with modern ones. Not to mention, it is becoming difficult to recognise someone’s nationality by their look. In today’s developed world, distinctions between
people
 from different cultural backgrounds are becoming less evident. Despite the fact that sharing the same habits would reduce miscommunication across
cultures
, losing interests and traditions would result from
this
 similar lifestyle.
Therefore
, I believe that the disadvantages of
this
 outweigh its benefits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Global market
  • Brand proliferation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Globalization
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Mass media
  • Cultural identity
  • Monoculture
  • Consumerism
  • Multinational corporations
  • Cross-cultural
  • Ethnocentrism
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Local traditions
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